Damn I can feel this simmering. It’s small but explosive. A universe in a nutshell. I had to read it again because I didn’t want to miss anything. Great stuff.
sometimes you dont seem to know how good the writing is you did until you get the feedback and realise how good it hits. I dont think ive read anything quite like how this piece worked (for me anyway!)
Thank you so much! I was definitely channeling your [57] and Sticks energy — along with some other stuff I’ve read recently on here. Was trying to branch out and do something different, so it’s very nice to hear that it works well haha
Raw energy. Damn good
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This is super clever and incredibly well done. It has the density of a star bracing for supernova.
THANK hah it has been very head-swelling to have a lot of the authors I respect and enjoy saying nice things haha it means a lot
sure things. loved it! Really inspired by the form
Damn I can feel this simmering. It’s small but explosive. A universe in a nutshell. I had to read it again because I didn’t want to miss anything. Great stuff.
Thank you so very much! I do feel like I packed a lot in there lol I was worried it was too much
The layers of words and their significance are so rich! I love how you can excavate new meanings each time. Not too much!
Thanks 🥲 means a lot
Damned clever stuff. word play. poetry. machine-like rhythm creating sounds in my mind. I can feel my own oven gloves. smell them. perfect.
A whole life boiled down and baked to a crisp finish then served up in rhe time it takes to eat one hot slice.
RIGHTEOUS GOOD. 😎
Thanks very much! I have been pleasantly surprised by the positive feedback
sometimes you dont seem to know how good the writing is you did until you get the feedback and realise how good it hits. I dont think ive read anything quite like how this piece worked (for me anyway!)
Yeah I agree, and sometimes the inverse is true. I think a piece is really good, but it doesn’t seem to garner much attention lol
Keith...my dude...this fuckin good.
Thank you so much! I was definitely channeling your [57] and Sticks energy — along with some other stuff I’ve read recently on here. Was trying to branch out and do something different, so it’s very nice to hear that it works well haha
I'm honored. 🙏
This is absolutely brilliant. So many layers, so much detail. Stripped.
[I] (thank) {you}¡
I see what you did <there>.
Wow, Keith! This a whole new level of Mr. Long! Impressed.
Thanks! It was fun to stretch myself lol