Oh really? That’s great! I never really know if anyone is listening to the audio or not, so I’m glad you made use of it and liked it 👍 Thanks so much! I am very excited to read your story and the others from the contest
I LOVE it when people include audio, because my day-job involves staring at a computer screen, I write my fiction on the same computer screen, and I often read ebooks, so my eyes need a break! (I also have three kids, so it’s great that I can listen while I do house stuff, although I have to be careful what I’m listening to if the younger ones are around!) Having said that, I’ve only added audio to one of my stories (even though I love reading aloud), as I haven’t got the voice for it. But yours was very enjoyable to listen to, as well as being an excellent story.
Ah yes I totally get that. My job affords a lot of listening time, which is nice. Making the audio is definitely a lot of work, but I’m excited to have a full finished audiobook for my novel when I’m done — I think it’ll be more accessible then
Fucking stunning Keith. Ingenious premise - so imaginative and exploding with reality - and the lines of the play just effortless woven in, and an aching story underneath it all that rears a poignant head at the finish - I shall be most surprised if you do not take the trophy home sir!
Wow this is such a unique story! I really enjoyed Deb as a character his dedication to the craft. The message behind his story becomes so much more meaningful after reading the twist at the end as well. Great job Keith!
Fantastic prose and verse. So descriptive and immersive without being overly wordy. I listened to the audio and I didn't want it to end!
Oh really? That’s great! I never really know if anyone is listening to the audio or not, so I’m glad you made use of it and liked it 👍 Thanks so much! I am very excited to read your story and the others from the contest
I LOVE it when people include audio, because my day-job involves staring at a computer screen, I write my fiction on the same computer screen, and I often read ebooks, so my eyes need a break! (I also have three kids, so it’s great that I can listen while I do house stuff, although I have to be careful what I’m listening to if the younger ones are around!) Having said that, I’ve only added audio to one of my stories (even though I love reading aloud), as I haven’t got the voice for it. But yours was very enjoyable to listen to, as well as being an excellent story.
Ah yes I totally get that. My job affords a lot of listening time, which is nice. Making the audio is definitely a lot of work, but I’m excited to have a full finished audiobook for my novel when I’m done — I think it’ll be more accessible then
That's great!
This absolutely deserves the mentions it's had! Brilliantly done and such an original idea.
Thank you!🫶 I saw we both made honorable mentions, congrats!
Thank you. Looking forward to some Keith Long short story collections!
this is an astonishing piece of work. i was one of the silent, breathless people in the audience the whole time.
Thanks, EJ. It means so much to hear stuff like that from authors who write my favorite Substack stuff
Fucking stunning Keith. Ingenious premise - so imaginative and exploding with reality - and the lines of the play just effortless woven in, and an aching story underneath it all that rears a poignant head at the finish - I shall be most surprised if you do not take the trophy home sir!
Oh wow, thank you! I am quite pleased with the way it turned out, though I will be most surprised (pleasantly) if I do take it home haha
Goddamn, this is good. Really, really good. I tip my hat.
👈🤠Thank ye much, mister.
Wow this is such a unique story! I really enjoyed Deb as a character his dedication to the craft. The message behind his story becomes so much more meaningful after reading the twist at the end as well. Great job Keith!
Thank you so much! I’m glad the mild twist actually works haha
Yesss this is my favorite short story for the world I love it so much!
Thanks! I added a decent amount to it and I think it turned out good — I’m happy with it lol
Yes it’s amazing :))
This is tremendous! I was swept away, and to find Deb’s lineage at the end of it … chef’s kiss!
Thank you so much! I’m glad that part came out, because I wasn’t sure I was… sneaky enough haha
You were the perfect amount of sneaky!
Thank you!! I tried to make it a minor reveal so I’m very pleased it turned out that way haha