Fucking stunning Keith. Ingenious premise - so imaginative and exploding with reality - and the lines of the play just effortless woven in, and an aching story underneath it all that rears a poignant head at the finish - I shall be most surprised if you do not take the trophy home sir!
Wow this is such a unique story! I really enjoyed Deb as a character his dedication to the craft. The message behind his story becomes so much more meaningful after reading the twist at the end as well. Great job Keith!
Keith, as always, your worldbuilding is so vivid and engrossing. Detailed but serving the needs of the story. Deb is a distinct, memorable character, easy to relate to in terms of his hopes, fears, and struggles. I loved how you tied up the end. 💜
Fucking stunning Keith. Ingenious premise - so imaginative and exploding with reality - and the lines of the play just effortless woven in, and an aching story underneath it all that rears a poignant head at the finish - I shall be most surprised if you do not take the trophy home sir!
Oh wow, thank you! I am quite pleased with the way it turned out, though I will be most surprised (pleasantly) if I do take it home haha
Goddamn, this is good. Really, really good. I tip my hat.
👈🤠Thank ye much, mister.
Wow this is such a unique story! I really enjoyed Deb as a character his dedication to the craft. The message behind his story becomes so much more meaningful after reading the twist at the end as well. Great job Keith!
Thank you so much! I’m glad the mild twist actually works haha
Yesss this is my favorite short story for the world I love it so much!
Thanks! I added a decent amount to it and I think it turned out good — I’m happy with it lol
Yes it’s amazing :))
This is tremendous! I was swept away, and to find Deb’s lineage at the end of it … chef’s kiss!
Thank you so much! I’m glad that part came out, because I wasn’t sure I was… sneaky enough haha
You were the perfect amount of sneaky!
Keith, as always, your worldbuilding is so vivid and engrossing. Detailed but serving the needs of the story. Deb is a distinct, memorable character, easy to relate to in terms of his hopes, fears, and struggles. I loved how you tied up the end. 💜
Thank you!! I tried to make it a minor reveal so I’m very pleased it turned out that way haha