Absolutely terrifying! As the man paddled further into the cave, i was whispering. “No, no, no…go back!” So many primal scares here: cave darkness, deep water, knowing something big is below you, horrible insects! Pure nightmare and beautifully delivered.
Absolutely terrifying! As the man paddled further into the cave, i was whispering. “No, no, no…go back!” So many primal scares here: cave darkness, deep water, knowing something big is below you, horrible insects! Pure nightmare and beautifully delivered.
Thank you so very much for the kind comment, it means a lot
Not only is this well written, but well read too
Great work!
Thank you very much, I’m glad to hear the reading isn’t as bad as it sounds to my ears haha I don’t think anybody likes their own recorded voice