An ingenious weaving of memories and the present moment that creates an eerie tapestry of shame and guilt. Once I started reading, I couldn't stop. Beautifully and terrifyingly done.
I’m so glad someone looked them up or at least understood their purpose there! They are words I have become familiar with through different mediums — music, movies, books, and each one fit quite well
An ingenious weaving of memories and the present moment that creates an eerie tapestry of shame and guilt. Once I started reading, I couldn't stop. Beautifully and terrifyingly done.
Very mysterious and poignant section titles, too! I had to look up what they meant. Love how they had another layer of meaning.
I’m so glad someone looked them up or at least understood their purpose there! They are words I have become familiar with through different mediums — music, movies, books, and each one fit quite well
This was so well done! The slow unfolding and reveal of Darren’s past was so heartbreaking and unsettling, and the descriptions were beautiful.
Thank you very much for the kind comment! I’m glad you liked it and it’s always special to hear someone enjoy my writing
Beautifully written and narrated.
Thank you so very much for checking it out and commenting, I really appreciate it!
Haunting heartbreaking and sad 💗 beautiful!
This comment showed up but then disappeared, now it’s back! Thank you so much for reading it, I’m glad you felt all that I tried to put in there.
I felt a lot of things :) great story!
Wow that was incredible, such a rich sensory landscape as well as emotional.
Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it
I like how the story on peels itself open.
Thanks! It was fun trying to trick the reader a little lol
A powerful guilt trip to hell. Thank you.
No, thank YOU
These were magnificent!
Thank you thank you thank you!