When She Kissed the Earth

[Emily S Hurricane]

Haunting heartbreaking and sad 💗 beautiful!

[Keith Long]

This comment showed up but then disappeared, now it’s back! Thank you so much for reading it, I’m glad you felt all that I tried to put in there.

[Emily S Hurricane]

I felt a lot of things :) great story!

[Honeygloom]

Wow that was incredible, such a rich sensory landscape as well as emotional.

[Keith Long]

Thank you very much! I’m glad you enjoyed it

[Jon T]

I like how the story on peels itself open.

[Keith Long]

Thanks! It was fun trying to trick the reader a little lol

[Making It Up As I Go Alone]

A powerful guilt trip to hell. Thank you.

[Keith Long]

No, thank YOU

[Daniel W. Davison]

These were magnificent!

[Keith Long]

Thank you thank you thank you!